Teacher Feedback

The improvements on our draft that have been suggested to us are as follows:

• More close ups and a wider variety of shots
• Our protagonist comes across as very annoying and we could prehaps benefit from reaction shots of another character
• Varied shot transitions into and out of rotoscoped sequences
• Protagonist should prehaps lip sync the entire thing
• Capture the mood and atmosphere more
• More stop motion

These are things that our group need to discuss together in detail, which we will do the next time we are all together (tomorrow most likely) and we will plan our changes and arrange more time for filming the rest of the footage